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Old May 28th, 2011, 04:58 AM
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Oooh, what an ending to that chapter. I wonder how Lucifer will deal with all of this.

This chapter had to one of my favorites. The scene when Zed showed Lucifer the picture of him force kissing Xandra was so descriptive, I could focus on it and really picture it in my mind.

But one thing with this story is each chapter is similar in some way. Try to change up how things happen in the next chapters.
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