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June 4th, 2011 (04:11 PM).
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Melbourne, Australia
I'm like Ron Weasly, but blonde! xDD;;
I wonder what I'd look like with blonde hair in real life... weird thought. xDD;;
Anyway, it's pretty good.
I feel sorry for the Rotom.
It's a good start. It's simple for people to understand, you didn't over complicate anything, really. Which is a major plus for the first chapter. I'm a sucker for dialogue, so you got me there. xD;
I might critique it a little more harshly as this story progesses. But for now, good job. :D
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