Thread: [Pokémon] The Pokemon Academy
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Old June 9th, 2011 (11:47 PM).
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But I believe every put in a good effort today
I think it should be everyone.

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and everyone replaced their Pokemon back in their balls and did so
placed rather than replaced. Or better yet,

everyone recalled their Pokemon back to their balls

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it was probably twice as big as most restuarants
I understand that this is a typographical error, but I need to point it out. Those kinds of errors are the easiest to overlook.

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Then we shall explain more of your education afterwards." Oak announced
Then we shall explain more of your education afterwards," Oak announced

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That night pasta was on the menu
That night, pasta was on the menu


I love how high-tech the Pokedex is, with fingerprint recognition, and voice recognition. And, I'm getting interested with Potions. What shall they study in Potions? Looking forward for chapter five.

And, I was counting back the hours when you said that he last ate before boarding the train, when you said it was five hours ago. Four hours were spent during the Poke-hunt, and almost 15 minutes for the happenings after boarding the train and before eating. So technically, the train station is a 45-minute ride from the academy. Just saying.
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