Oh, wow! This gave me goosebumps... It was confusing at first, when the clock was moving backwards. I was about to start reading the story bottom up, but then you clarified that it was supposed to be that way. I found it interesting how the Kadabra was speaking of pain, and fear. I always pondered why pokemon wouldn't just turn on the trainers, and instead mindlessly battled other pokemon... It was always odd. I liked how this story turned out! Haha, good work!