Thread: [Pokémon] Pokémon - Legends of Kanto
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Old July 5th, 2011, 02:49 PM
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Etoire
Beginning Trainer
 
Join Date: Jul 2011
Gender: Male
Oh, no, I'm not a good writer. Occasionally I dabble in some role playing, story writing of sorts, but I'm not good enough to write my own stories. I just catch onto some small things that could be changed, nothing to be thankful for. Thank you, though!

I enjoyed the battle scene, the detail was really good! I could picture every move as it occurred! Your writing improved a lot too, at worst a minor typo here or there. I really liked the latest chapter!
The Silph Co. Chronicles (Finished)
Character: Raymond Li
Pokemon: Sulli the Absol
Etoire the Gyarados
Jin the Scizor
Sol the Electivire
Aggron the Aggron