Pokémon - Legends of Kanto
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July 7th, 2011, 11:35 PM
Join Date: Jun 2011
Red walked through the shade of the trees in the direction that led back to the main path,
unable to proceed in the forest since he had no pokemon after his loss
. As he stared down into
Charmander’s weakly opened eyes, he found himself
in thought about his crushing defeat at the hands of Blue and
His sorrow and rage was obvious, as his face showed an expression that did nothing to hide his feelings.
That honestly sounds a lot better haha. While I do appreciate the contribution, I honestly might not use it because they're not my words. It's probably cause I'm a musician, but I don't like using creativity if it isn't my own.
But dude you should totally try your hands at writing, if you can add that to my story, you might be surprised at what emerges if you try your own story.
Credit for the theme goes to Hybrid Trainer
anyways, check out my fanfic, Legends of Kanto
first volume completed, chapter releases on the way!
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