Thread: The Scary Door
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Old July 26th, 2011 (9:02 AM).
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Dagzar Dagzar is offline
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I skimmed it, but it was hard to read because the parapraghs are all squished together. Double-space them, and then I'll come and give it a proper review.
"After being saddled with two ten-year-old brats and being sent out on her long overdue Pokemon journey, she can’t help but wonder… is it worth it?"
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