Hang on; does Matt even have a Marshtomp? I thought it was a Swampert?
As for the creepy-as-hell hotel that Sapphire led them to in her drug-induced state, was that based off of anything in particular?
Nice reference to the Animorphs, by the way. It had all the potential in the world, but it just sucked too much to take advantage of its fairly-original concept. I couldn't help but grin at the Hork-Bajir line. Ah, sweet memories...
I couldn't really find any errors aside from the Marshtomp line, so I have to give you kudos for that.
Your friendly on-again-off-again lurker/reviewer,