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Old August 7th, 2011, 09:16 AM
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Hiya! Lets see how i can help...

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Cloyster (M) @ White Herb
Trait: Skill Link
EVs: 48 [COLOR=blue ! important][COLOR=blue ! important]HP[/COLOR][/COLOR] / 252 Atk / 208 Spd
Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
- Shell Smash
- Icicle Spear
- Rock Blast
- Razor Shel
First off, you spelled Shell Wrong

Anyway, Its a standard Shell Smash-a-lot set, i guess thats pretty good, uh White Herb im not sure if thats a good idea, i'd try sash just in case they carry a move that would 1hko, so you can just attack them and sweep the next turn after the smash. But if the herb has made a difference, than keep it, thats up to You. Its a standard, set, so i dont have much to say on improving other than item issues

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Ludicolo (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Swift Swim
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- Swords [COLOR=blue ! important][COLOR=blue ! important]Dance[/COLOR][/COLOR]
- Waterfall
- Seed Bomb
- Drain Punch
I applaud your usage of Ludicolo, not only is he pretty bulky, but hes a nice physical sweeper. Now, i will say that there are better sweepers than Ludicolo at doing his job, and i reccomend him as a wall, but thats just me. I dont really have much else to say because ive never used him...So yeah that


Ok im too lazy to put your team members in quotes, so i'll just say what i have to say.


Chandalure, Scrap Hex, just give it shadow ball, i dont think toxic hex is a good idea, just because it takes 2 turns and chandey is too frail for it.

Snorlax, wtf? No offense, but ive never seen this set, that can either be good or bad, depending on how good the custom set is, but it doesn't seem like it gets good coverage. I reccomend curselax, it works like a charm. Or stocklax, that works good too so you can ram out powerfull body slams while taking absolutley no damage whatsover, than rest it all up

Im gonna let someone else talk about your metagross replacement, because i have absolutley no clue

Gliscor, i have nothign to say either

Well you asked for stuff about metagross replacement, but i gave you crap about your other teammates, sorry
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