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Unread August 7th, 2011, 06:19 PM
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Join Date: Nov 2007
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VelocityQ's RP thread is denied.
You describe the academy pretty well but there is no real background story. The RP feels substance-less. Please add some kind of story for the players to imagine themselves in, and describe why there are criminals there. Incorporate them into the plot?
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