This looks real nice. I'll have to download it and play it sometime.
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Originally Posted by NarutoActor
I need a grammar/spelling fixer. Any one up to the task? Also just to re-cap Light is always looking for eager spriters and asm hackers.
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Would that task entail anything specific? I don't have much to do (though that
may change in a week), so perhaps I may have enough time to help out.
Also, some more fixes:
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Originally Posted by NarutoActor

*She 's a scientist, and the Gym Leader ...
[Apostrophe for possessive "she". Also, "a" implies that there are multiple Gym Leaders for that city. I'm assuming that there's only one.]

* Crap ! I wasn't sup pos ed to be seen by civil ians!
[A comma or period could also work in place of that first exclamation mark.]

* It ap pears to be a switch.

* ["]D IALGA, the legendary Pokemon of time."
[The caps are to maintain consistency with "PALKIA", below. In XSE, a bracketed quotation mark will become an opening quotation mark, whereas an unbracketed one is a closing mark.]

* ["]PALKIA , the legendary Pokemon of space."
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