Wow, Luke. You've got yourself quite the game here :O
It's amazing. The storyline and artwork catch my eyes most. The OW sprite of Diane is really good, too.
All those character bios seem well thought out.
A lake of lava seems practically impossible, as it would become stone right away. Unless you have like a super boiler under it, and have the lava flow constantly. But it's a world of magic and Pokémon, so who cares? xD
On another note, Have you decided on a trait for Bravery yet?
This looks like a really good game so far, and I hope you'll finish it someday. (The bigger projects usually die sooner than the smaller ones, of course, but with enough determination, I'm sure you can do it.)