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Old September 12th, 2011 (05:32 PM).
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Skymin
part time demon hunter
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: AU
Age: 21
Nature: Quirky
Alrighty, just a few things;

I've already talked about your psyche, so that's okay.

Can I have a written Appearance? XD Also, i need you to develop a little more on this history. Where was she born? Where was she raised, if it was not somewhere different? What age did she start her journey? Does she have any brothers or sisters? etc etc etc. develop your character a whole lot more! <:

And with your RP sample, you don't have to define someone before they talk with the "Jessica:" XD

other than that, it seems quite fine! <:
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