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Old October 2nd, 2011 (05:36 PM).
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mzmingle's Pokemon - Gym Leaders Adventure is declined.
Can I have just a little more storyline? Perhaps why they retired, or why they all retired at the same time or why Team Rochaer surfaced? Yeah, gonna need a little more storyline than five sentences sorry.

Nintendoshs's Jhoto: Zombiemon is declined.
Again, there's not much to the storyline. Why did the apocalypse start? Why is that team creating zombies? You need a little more depth to it.

Fuyu's IC is accepted!
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