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Old October 8th, 2011 (06:11 AM).
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Skymin
part time demon hunter
 
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: AU
Age: 21
Nature: Quirky
miley810's Forced Adventure is declined.
It has potential, but there's nothing that really explains why anything happened. Why was Team Diamond focusing on the school? Why was it so important for them to be prepared for an attack? Please go over your plot and try put more detail into it.

Fearless Love's IC is accepted.
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