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Old October 11th, 2011, 04:22 PM
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lolwhet
Beginning Trainer
 
Join Date: Oct 2011
Gender: Male
Nature: Relaxed
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Originally Posted by Vladimir312 View Post
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Nice job! It looks pretty good for a route, mainly like one that would appear later on in the game.

Pros:
- Nice variety of tiles.
- Pretty good layout.
- A few nice trainer locations.

Cons:
- Trainers are too close together
- ONE TILE PATHWAYS ONE TILE PATHWAYS ONE TILE PATHWAYS
- The small bushes near the house look weird; try extending the fence to block off that area, it will flow better.
- I don't like the location of the pokeball under the dirt path, put it in the grass next to the rock instead.
- Random cuttable tree and pointless fence next to the house (unless you have another purpose for it.)

Also.. What's the point of having the blocked off pathway, when you can walk or surf around it? If you didn't do that on purpose, you might wanna fix!
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Now, for mine:

REVAMP'd!

I revamped my previously posted map, based on some suggestions that I got.

I'm really new to mapping.

Here it is!

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