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Old October 15th, 2011 (06:00 AM).
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AlfaTyrogue
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Join Date: Oct 2011
Location: Denmark
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Quote originally posted by Ray Maverick:

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Review: The tileset is amazing and original though you can see some old stuff like the cliffs and such giving it a very nice overall look.
As a starter town it is well built and seems big though it is very small.
My problem with this Town, though, is the fact that there are so many details. I get overwhelmed and when glancing it it's hard to tell the structure due to so much stuff evrywhere.

Suggestions: Though I was harsh on the amount of details it's not that much; remove some flowers or ponds here and there and cut down the variety of trees.
You don't have to be too simple, though. Find the right mix between details and simplicity

Rating: 9/10

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Now for my map:

Map name: Producton City

Tileset: FR/LG

Comments: The powerplant is supposed to be a research lab and the cave is a mine. The citizens are mostly workers or scientists.
I know there are border errors but I'm fixing it so don't worry.

Map:
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