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Old October 15th, 2011, 04:56 PM
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Hmmm...I have never really given critiques here before, so please bear with me.

I do think it looks pretty good, and the Pick filtered look add to the creepy factor, if that was what you were going for, lol. You chose a good font, in my opinion, for the text, as it fits the general tone. But I also think that the splatters near the top seem kind of uniform, and a little more randomness might make that look a little better. Overall, I think it looks pretty good.

Here is something I just finished, and I know it probably could use some work, so I figured, hey, let;s get some help so I can improve. ^__^

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