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Old October 20th, 2011 (12:10 PM). Edited October 24th, 2011 by JalordaSerpent.
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Originally Posted by Pikapal642 View Post
Hmmm...I have never really given critiques here before, so please bear with me.

I do think it looks pretty good, and the Pick filtered look add to the creepy factor, if that was what you were going for, lol. You chose a good font, in my opinion, for the text, as it fits the general tone. But I also think that the splatters near the top seem kind of uniform, and a little more randomness might make that look a little better. Overall, I think it looks pretty good.

Here is something I just finished, and I know it probably could use some work, so I figured, hey, let;s get some help so I can improve. ^__^

First, great tag! The tog and bottom black borders fit with the tag!
Now, you could put something in that blank green space to the left of the tag like a C4D that's blended in correctly and a few effects to go with the C4D, pretty much anything that will make the black area more interesting. The rest looks pretty good to me! Great job!:D

Here are 3 of latest works to be rated.

Let somebody else try first.