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Old October 24th, 2011, 01:26 PM
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Thank you very much for the long and thoughtful reply I will keep all this great advice in mind what was most helpful was your advice on battles that has been a major problem I am rewriting chapter 4 again and it still doesn't feel right. I just can't see Roark as a major threat, I honestly see him as someone who got his position from being a gym leaders son... Also is it a good idea to give gym leaders more Pokemon or should I keep their original teams so the reader feels more comfortable?
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