Psss. I don't want yo stupid cake, we have PIE! And FYI, It's apple pie: the source of existence!!! OH YEAH!!!!
lololol, You take this waaay to seriously. xD
The appearence is a bit short but I'm letting it slide for two reasons.
1: You said you'd improve it and...
2: I also REALLY want to get this started
So lets go everyone!
What you should be doing:
Waking up! It's a bright sunny new morning for you demigods and you've got some tough training ahead... Today is Friday, the day campers play capture the flag in the forest surrounding camp half-blood... You haven't been able to play recently however, Chrion has been saying for some time now that due to "recent events", you don't have a clue what he means, the forest has been off limits, however last night at dinner he announced that capture the flag would resume. So wake up, get dressed, prepare yourself in whatever way you feel you need to! Then get yourself down to the forets edge to meet Chiron and wait for your fellow demigods should you need to.
Nooooo! You guys started overnight! Man time zones are screw-ed up. X3