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Old November 26th, 2011 (02:37 PM).
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Seems neat, if a little generic. I really like your monster designs! And what you've done so far with the code/layers of battle system is really impressive! It looks like it could be a lot of fun.

One suggestion I have is that you hire a professional website designer; the layout you are using right now is frankly eye-hurting, with clashing colors and intrusive advertisements, which would get in the way of enjoying the game.

Also, it looks like english is not your first language, is that correct? I suggest getting someone to write out your english-language descriptions because I find the site kind of confusing and hard to navigate.

Best of luck with your game!
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