: FireRed hack:
Pokemon Light Version [Beta 1 Released]
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December 5th, 2011 (01:35 PM).
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: New York City, USA
Very vibrant tiles you're using, I like it!
I'm not going to go over grammar, as others have already posted them. but as for pronunciation, I think these are a couple:
The fifth screenshot with The Professor saying "It's our job as the adults..."
Should there not be be a comma after 'adults'? It sounds kind of awkward to have a pause in the sentence there...
And the screenshot with the cellphone picture in the upper left; not sure if someone else posted this, but I think that line should go like this:
"You need to get one
they are very useful and necessary in today
..." Yeah, I hope you get what I mean...
Anyway, can't wait to play thias hack!
If you like SEGA (especially for their music,
is the place for you. Make sure you leave your shoes at the door we don't want no dirt up in here.
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