: FireRed hack:
Pokemon Light Version [Beta 1 Released]
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December 5th, 2011, 01:35 PM
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Very vibrant tiles you're using, I like it!
I'm not going to go over grammar, as others have already posted them. but as for pronunciation, I think these are a couple:
The fifth screenshot with The Professor saying "It's our job as the adults..."
Should there not be be a comma after 'adults'? It sounds kind of awkward to have a pause in the sentence there...
And the screenshot with the cellphone picture in the upper left; not sure if someone else posted this, but I think that line should go like this:
"You need to get one
they are very useful and necessary in today
..." Yeah, I hope you get what I mean...
Anyway, can't wait to play thias hack!
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