Thread: [Pokémon] Faded Glory
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Old December 8th, 2011 (08:23 PM).
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Oh, this is quite an interesting concept. I think this is my first time reading a fic where a legendary is accused of mass murder. Poor Mew. :< Also I too like your take on Pyrce. I’m guessing you’re basing him on his anime counterpart since you said you didn’t play any of the games featuring him?

Yeah, going to have to agree 1/4 is a bit much for a mass murder Pokemon. However, I see you changed it to 1/15, which is more reasonable I think.

Overall this is a good start to a fic with lots of potential for mystery. Can’t wait to see what else will happen in this fic!
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