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December 11th, 2011 (03:33 AM).
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Brazil, why?
I really liked the poem, very deep and all, but some lines caught my attention, for example you start the poem with “And”, when it implies addition and must come with a previous sentence, some like this style though, so I’m not going very deep here. I liked the rhyming scheme too. And that’s it, there isn’t much to work on as the poem is great as it is.
"The past has gone, and the future's uncertain, but now is a gift, that's why it's called present"
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