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December 13th, 2011 (07:31 AM).
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Brazil, why?
Nice poem, but isn’t that a little too short? I know that the poem is describing the moth’s “story” but even so, it could have been larger; well, I like it simple, so ought to give you points for that. But really other than the fact that you capitalized some words when you didn’t need to (safe, content, warmth, light) the poem is great as it is. Congratulations and keep up like that.
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