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December 13th, 2011 (07:56 AM).
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Brazil, why?
Well, I like the fast pace of this poem, although I think you could have slowed it down a little bit to match Wobbuffet’s nature. I liked how you portrayed its abilities in the poem against that Houndoom, am I right? Anyways, I think that while you managed to get a rhyming scheme, some words don’t fit and some feel forced there just so it’ll rhyme, like “thee” for example.
Well, that was it, hope it was helpful, and keep it up like that, just remember to take this advice.
"The past has gone, and the future's uncertain, but now is a gift, that's why it's called present"
~ Dex Rotation [Red]
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