The Ballad of Greg Thomas
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February 22nd, 2012 (10:27 PM).
Join Date: Dec 2010
Thanks for the review! I was beginning to think this fic was losing attention.
As to the whole other Pokemon in Unova part: I've read a few Pokemon fics, and most of those just simply mixed and matched Pokemon generations. I thought nobody would notice if I did the same. There's another reason too; I don't like most Generation 5 Pokemon, to put it mildly.
As for the dwelling on points too long thing; I'll admit the airbag scene was word count padding. The I never shot anything though part I have a reason: I thought that trying to kill something in self-defense is a pretty big deal when it comes to morality and peoples' conscious.
Thanks for the help finding errors in my mechanics. I always seem to lose sight of errors here and there...
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