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Old March 3rd, 2012 (07:45 PM).
Nickalooose
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Join Date: Mar 2008
Gender: Female
At first I thought this was a joke... There's nothing there, but now people are commenting on it, I guess it isn't...

Doesn't this break the rules a little...

Here's my 2 cents;

1. Mapping is pretty shocking, considering you actually said
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
+All pokemon from Johto, Hoenn, and Unova (plus many others from Sinnoh and Kanto)

+Custom Scripts (Currently Recruiting Scripter)

+Custom Sprites and Tiles (THANKS COLBAT AND CNG FOR HGSS TILES AND COLBAT FOR SPRITES!)

+Whole new Elite 4 and 8 Gym Leaders

+Truely amazing scenery, and it's all made with HGSS Tiles + some other tiles that fit!


+-POSSIBLY SOME CUSTOM POKEMON-
2. Great story...
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
You are invited to stay at the Exploration event of...
What does this mean?
Nevermind, what does the rest of the story say...
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
The newly discoverd Shrine at the Vista Region!


...

So, your mom and you are moved into Starline City, along with professor Oak, Juniper, Others, ... and... A Old friend, and his followers.



...



Once settled in, you are told to go to Nova town to meet Juniper at her lab.



...



That's when things get out of hand...



You are given the ultimate chance to explore the vast region, make friends, and, catch pokemon.



... Will you take the chance for fortune and fame? Or crash and burn

along the way?



It all happens right here, in the Vista region! Your prime goal..




Be the best trainer, and get to the shrine!
Oh I get it, we create our own story, there are sooo many blanks here, where do I start...
The newly discoverd Shrine at the Vista Region!
I went to church, sat on santas lap, ask him for a pony
he said "no".
(The world must be against me...)

So, your mom and you are moved into Starline City, along with professor Oak, Juniper, Others, ... and... A Old friend, and his followers.(Why did these guys leave... Oh I forgot to mention... Nevermind... Where did I move from again, I got amnesia I guess.)
Once settled in, you are told to go to Nova town to meet Juniper at her lab.
Because I was such a naughty person I had to go get punished.
I never should've sold that little boy a poster of David Beckham in those underwear, oopsie!
That's when things get out of hand...
The picture got spread all over the internet, I didn't know what else
to do, so I popped the question...
Can I have a time machine?
"no" Juniper says... "I have a better idea"... So...
You are given the ultimate chance to explore the vast region, make friends, and, catch pokemon.
So this is like a carnival thing, I can only be a trainer if I win?!
... Will you take the chance for fortune and fame? Or crash and burn
along the way?
I wanna win... I just don't know how.
(I really do wanna be famous, how can I acomplish this by using
Pokémon, exactly?
)
It all happens right here, in the Vista region! Your prime goal..
(Oh I didn't know this, good job santa was mean to me
or I never would've move here
.)
Be the best trainer, and get to the shrine!
(What shrine? Oh the newly discovered one... I'm pretty sure I couldn't get close to this with it being a discovery and all, maybe you have a plot that allows you access, who knows! We surely don't.)

3. Custom Scripts, awesome, let's check a few out shall we...
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
+All pokemon from Johto, Hoenn, and Unova (plus many others from Sinnoh and Kanto)

+Custom Scripts (Currently Recruiting Scripter)

+Custom Sprites and Tiles (THANKS COLBAT AND CNG FOR HGSS TILES AND COLBAT FOR SPRITES!)

+Whole new Elite 4 and 8 Gym Leaders

+Truely amazing scenery, and it's all made with HGSS Tiles + some other tiles that fit!


+-POSSIBLY SOME CUSTOM POKEMON-
Oh, okay, so does this mean, you WANT custom scripts...? I think I confused myself...

4. Presentation huh...
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
Directly after the heroic events of the downfall of N
What's 'N'... My name starts with that letter, can I be the main character or something?
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
at the Pokemon Leauge... Things change. Drasticly.
Oh a 'Leauge', this must be a new addition to the new region, that's actually a good idea, I was a bit skeptic at first thinking it was a --->LEAGUE<--- type tournament... (I also did a search on Google for Leauge, so I'm assuming this is something you thought up, it's original.)

So let's recap on the Presentation part... A presentation is where you show us or explain to us something about the topic (I.E, Pokémon Orange.)

5. Well, moving on from the story part... Pokémon now.
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
+All pokemon from Johto, Hoenn, and Unova (plus many others from Sinnoh and Kanto)

+Custom Scripts (Currently Recruiting Scripter)

+Custom Sprites and Tiles (THANKS COLBAT AND CNG FOR HGSS TILES AND COLBAT FOR SPRITES!)

+Whole new Elite 4 and 8 Gym Leaders

+Truely amazing scenery, and it's all made with HGSS Tiles + some other tiles that fit!


+-POSSIBLY SOME CUSTOM POKEMON-
So your "NEW" region, has OLD Pokémon... Shouldn't you want to create your own fresh Pokémon?
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
+All pokemon from Johto, Hoenn, and Unova (plus many others from Sinnoh and Kanto)

+Custom Scripts (Currently Recruiting Scripter)

+Custom Sprites and Tiles (THANKS COLBAT AND CNG FOR HGSS TILES AND COLBAT FOR SPRITES!)

+Whole new Elite 4 and 8 Gym Leaders

+Truely amazing scenery, and it's all made with HGSS Tiles + some other tiles that fit!


+-POSSIBLY SOME CUSTOM POKEMON-
Oh okay, a possibility that there will be, it's a start I guess... Good luck! (Or have you not added (currently recruiting spriter) yet.)

6. Okay okay, so we have a new Leauge... Do we have a GMY(gym *cough*), or an Elite 6...
Quote originally posted by FSChris:
+All pokemon from Johto, Hoenn, and Unova (plus many others from Sinnoh and Kanto)

+Custom Scripts (Currently Recruiting Scripter)

+Custom Sprites and Tiles (THANKS COLBAT AND CNG FOR HGSS TILES AND COLBAT FOR SPRITES!)

+Whole new Elite 4 and 8 Gym Leaders

+Truely amazing scenery, and it's all made with HGSS Tiles + some other tiles that fit!


+-POSSIBLY SOME CUSTOM POKEMON-
Guess not...

I can't see mysellf, what you are trying to achieve, trying to do, or, have, thus far...

Little advice:
  • find someone who can write a proper story.
  • find scripter (if you're not willing to learn)
  • find spriter before you promise new Pokémon.
  • use less spacing in the OP.
  • keep updating.
  • keep listening and learning from other PokéHolics (haha, thought this was funny).
  • don't take criticism to heart, but listen to what people are suggesting, it's for your own good, believe me. Your second post is quite obtuse and abrupt!
  • try to avoid using mixed tilesets.
The list can go on, but I will stop, no need to go through too much and overload your mind with things that you will most probably ignore...


I personally would like more information and pictures, I want to see this get a little fan base, it has potential, definitly, DO NOT, do this on your own, try to get help, a team, or something, think you may need it, at least until you get some experience in this type of thing... Nevertheless, I had fun doing this, despite it being a waste of time