The Fall to Redemption [PG-13]
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March 25th, 2012 (8:02 PM).
Thank you once again for your constructive comments, Cutlerine. I've looked over your points regarding bold text and comma use and do I agree with your changes. I'm absolutely stunned, though, that I didn't catch my use of the adjective 'loud' twice in the same sentence! Ack!
This has certainly encouraged me to edit using a printed copy of chapter three. It seems like you miss so many little when reviewing on a computer screen.
Chapter three will be up tomorrow!
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