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April 5th, 2012 (08:18 PM). Edited April 7th, 2012 by Faolan.
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Hello, here is my first attempt at Pokemon Fanfic writing. All Criticism is welcomed.
"Are you sure its hatching, Laya?" Tamaska asked, watching the cracking egg worriedly.
"Of course it is." Laya answered, watching the yellow nose pop out of the egg.
"Cyn!" A small voice came from the small Cyndaquill, now out of the egg. The parents both gasped as they watched the newborn crawl towards them.
Laya pcked the Cyndaquill up and said "Its a boy! What should we name him?" she asked, looking over at Tamaska.
The Typhlosion thought for a moment, and said "Rebel?" Laya nodded and smiled.
"Thats a great name." She said, cradling the newborn. A few hours later, Rebel fell asleep. Their food supply was low, so Tamaska went off to hunt.
"Theres got to be more out here then just a Dunsprace..." He said, sniffing the air. A Tyranitar was trudging around angrily. He caught scent of Tamaksa and started in his direction, ready to release his anger. A little while later, The beast was upon Tamaska. Tamaska looked up at the beast, eyes narrowed and chest puffed out.
"What are you doing on my territory?" Tyranitar asked, staring down at him angrily.
"Your territory? This is mine!" Tamaska barked, a twinge of fear in his voice.
"Oh Really? How about we fight for it then?" Tyranitar challenged.
"Fine with me." Tamaska said. The two circled, then Tamaska jumped him. Tyranitar dodged, then grabbed him. He held a claw to Tamaksa's throat. Tamaska snarled and used Eruption. The move did little to Tyranitar.
"As if that would hurt me!" Tyranitar laughed and pressed the claw closer.
"Give in?" He asked.
"Never!" Tamaska barked.
"Fine." Tyranitar said, then slit his throat and dropped him.
Tamaska choked a little, blood pouring out of his throat. The Tyranitar watched him choke for a moment, then walked off. Tamaska finnaly bled to death, cursing the Tyrnaitar.
"Stupid rodent." Tyranitar laughed, walking away.
A few hours passed, and Laya was becoming anxious.
"I hope Tamaska is ok..." Laya thought worriedly. Soon the scent of Typhlosion blood drifted into the den.
"Tamaska!!" She barked, standing and dashed out of the den. Rebel was fast asleep, still in the den. Laya arrived at the scene, and fell to her knees.
"N-no..." She whimpered, tears streaming down her face. She then stood, enraged. She sniffed the air, and caught scent of Tyranitar.
"I'm going to find you and kill you!!!" She howled, dashing towards the scource of the scent. Tyranitar barely heard the howl and snorted.
"Bring it." The Tyranitar snorted. In a few moments, Laya was upon him, charging Double Kick. Tyranitar turned around, and his eyes widened.
"What the-" She kicked him in the face, then the Chest. He stumbled backwards and on to his back. Tyranitar roared and fired Hyper Beam at her as he stood, throwing her back and impaling her on a thick branch. She whimpered and coughed, then used Extrasensory to choke him. Tyranitar held his throat, slowly suffocating. He fell to his knees, and passed out.She kept suffocating him, until he finally died. She sighed in relief, and half smiled.
"G-good l-luck, Reb-bel..." She whispered, before finnaly releasing her grip on life. Later, An Umbreon and an Espeon were walking along the river, then suddenly caught scent of blood.
"Rin, do you smell that...?" The Umbreon asked. The Espeon nodded.
"Twist, it's Typhlosion blood...." Rin said sadly.
"Let's go," Twist said, dashing with Rin following. They found Tamaska's body.
"Hes dead." Rin said.
"Tamaska..." Twist growled. "Who could have done this?" He said, walking forward. Soon, they were upon Tyranitar and Layas' bodies. Rin shook her head.
"They had a baby, didn't they?" she asked.
"Yep. We should go check." Rebel was still asleep, dreaming of playing with other Pokemon. The Eeveelution Duo arrived at the den and gasped.
"They did." Twist said.
"We have to take care of him." Rin said, picking Rebel up by the scruff.
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