Thread: [Pokémon] The Creation of Dreams
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Old April 14th, 2012 (07:09 PM).
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Uh, I didn't do it
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As well as what he mentioned above, the format and lack of story besides the game, there are A LOT of grammatical errors and typos in this that make it very hard to read/follow; ie 'track' instead of 'truck', 'sing' instead of 'sign'.

I can help you out if you're willing to PM me.
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