This was the scariest part. It's like the ghost didn't realize the trainer had died until then.
You were going for creepy, and you reached it with this one-shot. I hope to see more from you. Maybe the next time procrastination strikes?
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I also was thinking of the Gastly line when writing this, so that's pretty cool. I'm also glad you thought the "baby" name was effective. I felt like a creepy person when typing it, really, but if it helped... that's good. haha.
And I'm a huge procrastinator, so I'm sure you'll be seeing more from me indeed. Thanks for reading/commenting~!