Thread: [Pokémon] Carry On, Blissey
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Old April 28th, 2012, 12:09 AM
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Intensive Operation


"Don't be so silly," I responded. "Of course you're good enough. You wouldn't be hear if you wasn't good enough."
Only mistake I could find :p

I am liking this story, it is going well. The life of a Pokemon nurse seems to be interesting than I thought. Also I liked how you have used the concept of bad egg. Spiritomb seems to be a great character and I think he could be more involved in the future...considering how the story is focusing on hacked syndrome.
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