I'm sorry it took me so long to respond! I've been very busy lately.
Thank you for giving me feedback, you have no idea how greatly appreciated it is. :D
More importantly though... I am very busy with AP testing, finals, and other stuff so I probably won't be writing for a while. It might actually be a better idea just to close this thread. Maybe I'll start this fan-fiction back up again when I am not quite so busy. Sorry!