Thread: LeafGreen hack: Pokémon Keratin Version
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Old June 1st, 2012 (09:52 AM). Edited June 1st, 2012 by hinkage.
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Quote originally posted by Cutlerine:


What kid talks like that? and refers to him/herself as a "mere child"? You may as well make her say "I have executed my plan in a perfect manner; I am never to be discovered as the culprit! Not a soul would even dream a youth would be capable of such thievery, yet I have proven them wrong and stolen the the keys that are held in such high value."

You need to give different people different ways of talking. A kid, especially, wouldn't talk like that. More like, "Ha ha! Who'd ever suspect a KID to steal the keys!" or something.
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