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June 11th, 2012 (1:15 PM).
Join Date: May 2011
Location: The USA
Really liked to see Kuiora's view and how it changed throughout this chapter from being excited to almost... angry. Desperate, maybe? I'm curious as to how Sai will react next chapter, especially since Kuiora evolved, which may or may not be a good thing for him. Kuiora would probably go through a complete mental overhaul, stepping away from being so immature and more toward her being superior. And Sai must be small, or Kuiora is just huge for a Croconaw. Judging from the anime, I thought Croconaw were about belly-height in comparison to people, and Feraligatr were the ones taller than humans.
In any case, the chapter was well written and entertaining just as the last. Loved the way Kuiora was portrayed. Keep it up!
★ Some Stars ★
~ on Chapter Four!
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