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Old June 13th, 2012, 09:37 AM
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fiOWNya
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Join Date: May 2012
Location: Washington
Age: 23
Gender: Female
Nature: Quirky
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Originally Posted by MaTe9usz6 View Post
This is my map to my game Pokemon Shadows&Lights (only Polish language version) it name is "Forgom Forest".
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What is your opinion about this map?
4/10
The grass looks odd, grass generally doesn't come in little circles. Also, don't know if you ripped the trees, grass, branches, etc yourself, but the shadow/outline should be changed to something to match the grass. It looks really choppy.

As far as the map itself goes, I would probably widen the path just a little for ease of movement. I think the overall layout of the trees looks good (they aren't just in lines, they are natural looking). I also like the river going through the town, there just aren't enough rivers around. However, the buildings, benches, and lights seem somewhat haphazardly placed.
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