I don't think I recognize that flying/bird PKMN based on your description though... =/
It's a Rufflet, no big deal. Its appearance will be explained next chapter. Thanks for commenting!
Glad you like it so much! The bird pokemon is just a Rufflet, though perhaps a real legendary will appear sometime. Something will be done with the magikarp, not sure what yet. Thanks for commenting!
It is, and I'm glad you like it so far. Hope you keep reading, thanks for commenting!