Though I have to admit that I am fond of the Tyrannomon family. They're one of my absolute favorite Digimon families, so to see DarkTyrannomon and MetalTyrannomon in this fic made me happy.
I still like how Jacob and Ross are written. They're not the obvious "leader" and "lone wolf", but they do have those qualities. Jacob wants to do the right thing, and Ross wants to do the safe thing. And they're old enough to keep their feelings in check to be helpful during the war.
Since you ended this chapter on a cliffhanger, you know I'm looking forward to more. Especially to find out more about the Commander, who seems like a much more badass version of the Kaiser from 02.