Thread: [Pokémon] Some Stars
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Old July 3rd, 2012, 08:11 AM
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DarkIceForever
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Join Date: Dec 2011
Location: California
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Nature: Adamant
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Wow what a drastic turn. He's going to die? Marcelo did sound sick from the last chapter. I'm a little saddened. Reminds me of the good kids who die young.


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Anyway, I didn't enjoy writing this chapter that much, which is probably why it took so long to write it. It wasn't fun, and research for the best of me since I had to check facts here and there, although you might not notice. Even so, I'd like it if you corrected me on things, because I might have overlooked a few things
Yup, somehow I could tell you didn't have fun writing this one. I don't know why. It probably because it's shorter. I hope you continue it. Sorry I couldn't find anything wrong with this one.
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