Thread: [Dead] Pokémon Apexin Version
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Old July 9th, 2012, 03:12 AM
I'm gone. Bye.
Join Date: Feb 2009
Location: Undertaker. Co.
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Nature: Naughty
Nice story, not too much is given away, but the general gist of it is revealed, I like that.
I'm hoping the characters sprites are placeholders deeming to be changed.

This bit, has an awful resemblence to:
In B/W2 (I'd post a screenshot but I can't find one, and have no time to make one myself.)

All in All, the story is somehwat good, but chracter and mapwise you need some more work.