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Old July 15th, 2012 (04:59 PM).
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& time lord
 
Join Date: Nov 2007
Location: Skaia
Gender: Female
Nature: Naive
Alright, looking better. Can just you maybe rewrite the Appearance and try to give a, hm, more systematic description of what he looks like? Because I find it hard to picture him in my head now :3 otherwise, the SU is ok.
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