Thread: [Pokémon] The Unova Journey [PG]
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Old July 18th, 2012 (10:29 PM).
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Hey everyone, this is my "fanfic" you could say, basically it's a story I'm writing in my little writing journal thingy. Anyways here is Chapter 1, any criticism is allowed. Thanks for reading!


Stumbling into a pokemon lab half asleep holding a cup of coffee can’t ever be the best idea, but that just so happened to be what 16 year-old boy Zach Stryker was doing the very morning of July 2nd, 2012 (Cuz I can that’s why.)
Zach sat down in a not-so comfortable waiting chair sipping his coffee slowly in the dim light of the Juniper pokemon lab, waiting for the Professor to show up. As Zach finished off his coffee he heard a slamming noise in the back room. Zach shot up from the chair, dropping his cup in the process, and approached the back room cautiously.
“Professor Juniper? Is that you?” Zach said shakily. The back room was pitch black and completely silent. Zach searched for a light switch on the wall with his hand but found none. As his eyes adjusted he noticed a dark mass sitting on the floor. He rushed up to it and noticed that it was Professor Juniper, who had been knocked unconscious.
Just then something jumped out of the shadows and launched itself at Zach. Zach struggled to get lose as whoever it was had a very strong grip. Zach threw a punch right at the figure’s side. The punch was enough to loosen the figure’s hold on Zach enough for him to wriggle out and run for the other side of the room. Zach felt around for anything he could use as a weapon and felt his fingers wrap around the familiar shape of a pokeball. In a panic he pushed the button and threw the ball at the general direction of the figure.
Out of the ball popped a Aron, a small pokemon covered in iron.
“Aron! Use Tackle!” Zach commanded.
The small pokemon charged at the figure an slammed into it full force. The figure was slammed into the back wall with the force of a freight train. For a small pokemon, Aron packed a punch.
“So it’s a battle you want!?” The voice came from the figure. His voice was raspy and Wheezing (<-- Ha see wat I did thur? I made a funny.) A pokeball flew out of the man’s hand and out came a Woobat.
“Woobat, use gust!” The figure said. The Woobat flapped its tiny wings and shot a gust of air at Aron... and missed completely. As it turned out Woobat has no eyes, therefore can’t see their target, and miss most of the time.
“Aron! Tackle that Woobat!” Zach ordered. Aron tackled the Woobat to the ground. The Woobat couldn’t handle anymore and fainted.
“T-This isn’t the last of us! The Plasma Army will prevail!” The man said shakily, then ran out of the lab. Zach collapsed against a wall in relief. The Aron was still out of it’s pokeball, and slowly approached Zach. Zach picked up the small pokemon and set him on his lap, and waited for Juniper to wake up.

Subject Name- Zach Stryker
Current Status- Unconscious
Current Pokemon:

Unnamed (Aron) Lv. 7 @ None
Nature: Mild
Ability: Sturdy
Moves: Tackle, Harden, Mud Slap


Also, I do note that the formatting is kind of off, but I don't know how to make it work, as I had to copy and paste this from Google Docs- I apologize in advance.
I swear I will put something here! Just... Not, NOW. Ya know.
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