Thread: [Pokémon] The Unova Journey [PG]
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Old July 19th, 2012, 03:59 PM
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Nolafus
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Join Date: Jul 2012
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A good start, but try not to be biased against certain pokemon. I can tell you're not a fan of woobat because you made it lose easily and it doesn't miss most of the time because of echolocation (it emits soundwaves that bounce off of objects and return so woobat can tell where everything is). Therefore it doesn't need light or eyes to "see" and it should have had the advantage fighting in the dark. Try to use more of the pokemon's anatomy to affect the fighting. That's my only critique and I hope I helped. Good beginning.
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