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Old July 27th, 2012 (8:54 AM).
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You should definitely read over those threads I recommended to you before, because when you roleplay, you don't use the "*" to denote action (RHCP actually mentions that), and even though it's not my place to say this, with the current length of your SU, it won't be accepted. Honestly, I'd be happy to help you out, but I can't mentor you, so just PM me if you need anything.
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