Right, you have me as your first reviewer. Let's see. Well section rules state that you must post a chapter in it's intireity. Also, I think the italics is a dream, but it isnt explained. Having Vitini and groundons ruby seems inexplicable unless they are a legendary trainer, and if they were why would they only have Victini and not put up a fight? A lot of questions remain unanswered. It is though,decent. I rate this 7 out of 10. Don't feel bad, I gave both my stories 4 and my favourite 9. VM me when the next part is on and I will review in more detail.