Thread: [Pokémon] Redemption
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Old July 29th, 2012, 02:39 AM
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Rayshin
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Join Date: Jul 2012
Location: The Endless Void of Space
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Nature: Relaxed
Thank you for your review, docowocool. I will edit the first post to complete the first chapter. I will also put in a plot as to why he has a Victini for a companion and why he didn't put up a fight.
Please review so that I may improve to suit your desires.
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Last edited by Rayshin; July 29th, 2012 at 09:45 AM.
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