Thread: [Pokémon] Redemption
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Old July 29th, 2012 (02:39 AM). Edited July 29th, 2012 by Rayshin.
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Thank you for your review, docowocool. I will edit the first post to complete the first chapter. I will also put in a plot as to why he has a Victini for a companion and why he didn't put up a fight.
Please review so that I may improve to suit your desires.
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