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Old August 2nd, 2012 (06:21 PM).
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Quote originally posted by Red's Hawt Chibi Pelippers:
I like your distraction And yeah, perhaps you can try to be a little more coherent in your posts, but I like that you give us a feeling for what's going on in Vinnie's mind

Uh huh. I like writing like that, but my English Teacher said no one could understand it if I jumped too much...and I actually trimmed it down a bit when I edited. But the moments like that in the future will be shorter and less frequent, as well as a bit more coherent.
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