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Old August 26th, 2012 (09:51 AM).
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Quote originally posted by Vato:


And, romdinner, your SU is great, but there are a few parts that confuse me:



Here you said that Lily has a daughter, but then you say she's eleven, so... yeah.
There's also a typo...

Then you said that she decided to go to Hoenn, and she took a ship to Johto, so... is it possible for you to edit your SU so that you can clear things up?
If you do that, you're accepted, in the meantime, you are pending...



Anyways, if romdinner is accepted, then there would be no more spots, but I've been thinking about adding 2 more spots (Spheal & Slugma) for those who also want to join (assuming there's anyone else), but, what do you guys think about this?
The daughter belongs to the man that requested Lily's help ( but it was just a lie so she could get Lily up to the cabin and imprison her there ). I've redone the part there so I hope it's a little less confusing.

And I've corrected the Johto thing... my bad...my mind was somewhere else X_X.
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